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Hi my name is Lucas. I'm New Zealand greatest Olympic Mascot in the world. I'm a kiwi that is 30 meter long also I have a yellow long beak like a human but we have the shortest Nose.
My Mascot likes to run and he likes to stretch. He also likes to jump high in the bright blue sky.
I live in a big forest with loads of long brown green trees. My kiwi Olympic Mascot sleeps in a big hole with loads of brown leafs. There is also blue light Walter near my kiwi mascots hole. My kiwi’s hole is golden brown like the trees .
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