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Wednesday, 20 June 2018

Drawing


This is my drawing about a homeless man living on the streets and as he puts his sign up a man comes
along and laughs at him because he has no where to stay and he has ripped clothes.
comment down below what you think.

Monday, 9 April 2018

Angles

Crunchie



Chocolate Challenge


Crunchie
Tehillah- Crunchie is yum because it is full of flavor .
If you eat Crunchie you will have the best feeling ever.
I have tasted it.It tasted like a mouth full of yumminess.
The ingredients they have will make you fell in love with
crunchie.


Maria Ingredients  - Crunchie has a lot of ingredients in.
It has golden hokey pokey  honeycomb covered in cadbury milk
chocolate.
It’s has 931kg of energy , 7.5g 11% 14.9% fat and the Sugar
31.4g 35% 62.8g.
The Chocolate makes you happy if you are feeling sad .

Ayla- Crunchie has all the ingredients .
Chocolate Covered Honeycomb Crunchie bars based on the
Cadbury Crunchie
candy bar,
these gorgeous chocolate treats contain only 6 ingredients and are
gluten-free,
vegan and fabulously good.


I think Picnic has a lot yummy ingredients.
They make their chocolate so yummy that you will be dreaming
about it in bed.

It was so hard to compete with there chocolate since
people love picnic even I love picnic.

But here is something you don’t know about Picnic .
Picnic make you sick if you are Allergic to peanuts so
that is why you shouldn't buy picnic.


Wednesday, 4 April 2018

introduction to Algebra!

Justifying an argument.

Justifying an argument
WALT: justify our ideas using conjunctions


Author A:
I strongly believe that students need school uniforms. Students need school uniforms because they show
people what school they go to. All of the students look tidy because they are in the same school and its
like free advertising because when people see the uniform they think of the school. So yeah, school
uniforms are good.


Author B:
I firmly believe that school uniforms should be banned. School uniforms are costly and they put a lot of
pressure on the student’s caregivers. Children need new school uniforms every time they grow and
change schools. With some items of clothing costing a hundred dollars or more, the cost involved in
buying a new school uniform is huge! It is particularly difficult for families with two or more students,
as it is hard enough to feed a large family let alone buy an expensive school uniform every year for
each child. School uniforms should be banned for the benefit of parents everywhere!


Which argument do you think is stronger? I think that B is stronger because B has said that school
uniforms should be banned, because uniforms cost way to much and they put a lot of pressure on the
student’s caregivers.


What vocabulary do the authors use that you would like to steal? caregivers,expensive, benefit
,particularly,involved.


What did you like about the paragraphs? I liked the way they were friendly arguing and how they both
shared their own opinion about if we should have uniforms or if we shouldn’t have uniforms.


What do you think the authors could improve on? I think they should share more information about
the uniforms and they could improve on making nice uniforms for other student’s to ware.