Friday, 2 September 2016

PES Olympics Wheelbarrow race.

PES Olympics Wheelbarrow Race!

WALT: write an interesting recount by writing about our feelings and the feelings of others.

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

Room 9 has just completed the PES Olympics wheelbarrow race. Apparently there was some cheating in the race? How did this cheating affect you and your race?

It was a cold morning. Room 9 went to the breeze at Pt England school we were going to do a wheelbarrow challenge. It was only Tuesday the 30th of August. I felt nervous when we were going to do the race.

The boys and girls had to listen to what we were told after that we got to get into two partners and wait. Our teacher told us that the boys has to do the challenge first so they got into one line and got ready Mr baxendine halved the other side of the boys so they sat down our teacher said on your marks get set go and off they went some of the boys fell on the hard ground.

Yeah our teacher one the wheelbarrow race and all of the boys felt sad because our teacher had one the race so they sat down on the ground.

It felt like our teacher was cheating because our teacher was riding a wheelbarrow and the boys were holding the boy's legs and they were on there hands and our teacher was so big and fast as and the boy’s didn’t like people cheating so they got angry.



  1. Hello Ayla I really like your Wheelbarrow writing and it was fun reading it because it reminds me about the race and it was so funny.If your favourite part was the people that was in the wheelbarrow well that my favourite part to um.... so if you have other writing work I really would like to see it.

    From Christina

  2. Hi Ayla
    I really liked your wheelbarrow story it was very interesting and funny I liked your first sentence that said it was a very cold. Morning i just think that its cool

    From Saane