Thursday, 25 August 2016

Ayla Wining Gold!

Winning Gold!

WALT: create mood in our writing.

I was at the Rio 2016 Olympic games, the crowd was very loud. I saw that my mum was happy as she was watching me. I know she was proud of me because she was smiling at me and she was so glad. I heard the crowd screaming, cheering and also yelling. I saw some bright lights and I saw cameras taking photos of us. I smelt smoke coming from the fireworks that lit up into the sky and  exploded with different colours, they were  blue, red,  green,  yellow and black. Also I felt the ground shaking and I could hear the fireworks exploding with loud bangs that were hurting my ears.

I was standing on the podium at the Rio 2016 Olympic games. I got to shake the person's hand and he gave me my medal, a bronze medal. When I got my medal I was smiling at my mum and she was proud of me. I felt so happy and proud of myself because I got a bronze medal at the Olympics!   

Thursday, 18 August 2016

NZ Olympic Mascot.

Silver fern flag
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: add detail to our sentences to make our writing interesting.

Hi my name is Lucas. I'm New Zealand greatest Olympic Mascot in the world. I'm a kiwi that is 30 meter long also I have a yellow long beak like a human but we have the shortest Nose.

My Mascot likes to run and he likes to stretch. He also likes to jump high in the bright blue sky.

I live in a big forest with loads of long brown green trees. My kiwi Olympic Mascot sleeps in a big hole with loads of brown leafs. There is also blue light Walter near my kiwi mascots hole. My kiwi’s hole is golden brown like the trees .

Friday, 5 August 2016

Ayla olympic mascot reading

Ayla Egg 20meter sprint.

Mad egg emoticon - Public
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: write an interesting recount by adding detail to the end of our sentences.

In the Morning room 9 went down to the park at Pt England school.  

Room 9 went down to the park because they were having a Egg race we were going to draw a Egg face so we were given out a spoon and a color marker. Every one was done creating their Egg so we got ready for the Egg race.

So Mr baxendine said that you have to go over a thing and under a monkey bar so then we got ready to run and our teacher said on your marks get set go and we ran and some of them were cheating and some there Eggs cracked and they were terrified what they had done.  

My favorite thing was that we got to draw a face on our Egg and when we got to do the Egg race.