One day me and my family and my friend went for a walk and as we were taking a walk my whole family got captured, so me and my friend went looking for them. When we went looking for our family we said to each others they mitten gone this way inside this scary dark tunnel so off we went inside the tunnel. When we got inside the tunnel we saw some think glow and it was our family and when we untied them they said we were very nervous detective’s so when we said saved them we made too much noise the suddenly when we made too much noise some one said where do you think your going and then we said run and we ran as fast as we could and we made it and then our family said use two are the best rescuers in our family sand then they lived happily ever after.
But later that day when we first got to New Zealand the world was very silence and when i had found out that from my friend she said there was a crisis and that was we were not aloud to talk to anyone at all. If we talk we would go to prison and never come out ever again and if we talked to much we would never and i mean never see our family ever again.
Then the next day when we just landed on the moon there was nothing to do so we had suggested to have a celebration on the surface of the moon, it was so much fun and when we had finished having a celebration we had left and when we left they said i very wish we could stay on the moon and have another celebration so off they went back home and they lived happily ever after.
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Walt: Use the Game of Awesome cards as a prompt for creative writingWalt: Chunk writing into paragraphs with each paragraph being about one key idea
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