Monday, 19 February 2018

explanation writing

this is my explanation writing about how we save up our money.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Alya,

    I like how you put up the learning goal to show everyone what you are learning about ,

    I can connect to your statements because I also agree to what you have pointed out about about the poor and the rich,

    Hopefully next time you can put commas when there are long sentences so that nobody needs to lose their breath ,

    Amazing work !